Critics Wanted
Wednesday, November 23, 2005 by PoSmedley | Discussion: New Releases
I had an SS approved, but the WP I made and used in it was not. I thought it was my best work to date, but obviously I overlooked something. So, have at it. I want to know where I messed up or what I missed. Be honest and as brutal as you want, because I have other stuff I am working on and don't want to make the same mistakes.
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starkers
Reply #43 Friday, December 2, 2005 9:19 AM
Reply #43 Friday, December 2, 2005 9:19 AM
[Heck....something's wrong, I can't quote]
"It's the truth that Fairies wear thongs. One gentle breath of dragon fire and"........your binoculars go up in smoke.
If you hide in the bushes and be werry werry quiet, they will come a little closer so you don't need 'em anymore, just yer camera.
"It's the truth that Fairies wear thongs. One gentle breath of dragon fire and"........your binoculars go up in smoke.
If you hide in the bushes and be werry werry quiet, they will come a little closer so you don't need 'em anymore, just yer camera.
PoSmedley
Reply #44 Friday, December 2, 2005 9:50 AM
Reply #44 Friday, December 2, 2005 9:50 AM
I can't quote either?!?!?!?
Hairy Faries should take heed
be wary when the dragon breathes
engulfed in flames your thong will be
and butt crack burn is hard to treat
Asbestos thongs are not cheap
and they really don't protect the cheeks
but if from flames you need relief
just hang your azz in Wicklow creek
I can't believe they haven't locked this thread yet.
Hairy Faries should take heed
be wary when the dragon breathes
engulfed in flames your thong will be
and butt crack burn is hard to treat
Asbestos thongs are not cheap
and they really don't protect the cheeks
but if from flames you need relief
just hang your azz in Wicklow creek
I can't believe they haven't locked this thread yet.
Sleeping Dragon
Reply #45 Friday, December 2, 2005 9:55 AM
I can quote
Reply #45 Friday, December 2, 2005 9:55 AM
| I can't quote either?!?!?!? Hairy Faries should take heed be wary when the dragon breathes engulfed in flames your thong will be and butt crack burn is hard to treat Asbestos thongs are not cheap and they really don't protect the cheeks but if from flames you need relief just hang your azz in Wicklow creek I can't believe they haven't locked this thread yet. |
I can quote
Sleeping Dragon
Reply #46 Friday, December 2, 2005 9:56 AM
There is still time.
There once was a man from Nantucket
Reply #46 Friday, December 2, 2005 9:56 AM
| I can't believe they haven't locked this thread yet |
There is still time.
There once was a man from Nantucket
PoSmedley
Reply #48 Friday, December 2, 2005 10:04 AM
Reply #48 Friday, December 2, 2005 10:04 AM
There once was a man from Nantucket
who kept fairy hair in a bucket
When asked why, he said 'I freeze it with wine.
And sell them as Fairy Hair Sucketts"
I think I just jumped the shark.
who kept fairy hair in a bucket
When asked why, he said 'I freeze it with wine.
And sell them as Fairy Hair Sucketts"
I think I just jumped the shark.
aimzzz
Reply #49 Friday, December 2, 2005 10:07 AM
Reply #49 Friday, December 2, 2005 10:07 AM
I think a fairy hair sweater might be more festive at this time of year... 
PoSmedley
Reply #50 Friday, December 2, 2005 10:16 AM
Reply #50 Friday, December 2, 2005 10:16 AM
Fairy Hair sweaters can itch
and that's not the only glitch
Their pheromones arouse all dragons around
and one on your leg is a b----.
and that's not the only glitch
Their pheromones arouse all dragons around
and one on your leg is a b----.
Sleeping Dragon
Reply #51 Friday, December 2, 2005 10:25 AM
Reply #51 Friday, December 2, 2005 10:25 AM
...now we're getting closer to the "lock"
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Reply #41 Friday, December 2, 2005 8:41 AM