Critics Wanted
Wednesday, November 23, 2005 by PoSmedley | Discussion: New Releases
I had an SS approved, but the WP I made and used in it was not. I thought it was my best work to date, but obviously I overlooked something. So, have at it. I want to know where I messed up or what I missed. Be honest and as brutal as you want, because I have other stuff I am working on and don't want to make the same mistakes.
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PoSmedley
Reply #22 Wednesday, November 30, 2005 5:22 PM
Reply #22 Wednesday, November 30, 2005 5:22 PM
Hairy Fairies can be scary
So it's best, to be wary.
For though scarce and seen nary,
they thrive in woods and some on praries.
They grab you and they start to query,
If you really think them hairy.
One wrong answer, like my sister Mary,
and they force you to do hari-kari.
Somebody stop me.
So it's best, to be wary.
For though scarce and seen nary,
they thrive in woods and some on praries.
They grab you and they start to query,
If you really think them hairy.
One wrong answer, like my sister Mary,
and they force you to do hari-kari.
Somebody stop me.
aimzzz
Reply #26 Wednesday, November 30, 2005 7:03 PM
Reply #26 Wednesday, November 30, 2005 7:03 PM
Seemed that the need for critics had increased... 
starkers
Reply #28 Wednesday, November 30, 2005 10:13 PM
Why? You were going great guns
The was a young fairy called Nuff
Whose flights were often rough
When jet propelled
Some say she smelled
Others said that's fair enough
Reply #28 Wednesday, November 30, 2005 10:13 PM
| Somebody stop me. |
Why? You were going great guns
The was a young fairy called Nuff
Whose flights were often rough
When jet propelled
Some say she smelled
Others said that's fair enough
PoSmedley
Reply #29 Thursday, December 1, 2005 12:03 AM
Reply #29 Thursday, December 1, 2005 12:03 AM
Hairy Fairies can be scary
when covered all in dingleberries
So you best not tarry
when you smell a Hairy Fairy
when covered all in dingleberries
So you best not tarry
when you smell a Hairy Fairy
starkers
Reply #30 Thursday, December 1, 2005 3:58 AM
Reply #30 Thursday, December 1, 2005 3:58 AM
There was a young fairy from Ealing
Who had a most peculiar feeling
Without as much as a care
She flew through the air
And left hair all over the ceiling
Who had a most peculiar feeling
Without as much as a care
She flew through the air
And left hair all over the ceiling
PoSmedley
Reply #31 Thursday, December 1, 2005 3:42 PM
Reply #31 Thursday, December 1, 2005 3:42 PM
Hairy Fairies can't use Nare.
On the can, a warning's there,
that Hairy Fairies should beware
and never..NEVER..consider Nare.
For Hairy Fairies using Nare
will often find themselves impared.
For Nare on Fairies will GROW hair
and with a Schick they'd better fare.
So if you see a Hairy Fairy
or a Fairy nary hairy,
please remind them to be wary
for Nare will only make them hairy.
A Quatro or Norelco where
they have the need to shed some hair
will better serve them if they care
that others snicker at their hair.
It's not my fault. I ran out of meds.
On the can, a warning's there,
that Hairy Fairies should beware
and never..NEVER..consider Nare.
For Hairy Fairies using Nare
will often find themselves impared.
For Nare on Fairies will GROW hair
and with a Schick they'd better fare.
So if you see a Hairy Fairy
or a Fairy nary hairy,
please remind them to be wary
for Nare will only make them hairy.
A Quatro or Norelco where
they have the need to shed some hair
will better serve them if they care
that others snicker at their hair.
It's not my fault. I ran out of meds.
starkers
Reply #32 Friday, December 2, 2005 12:48 AM
Reply #32 Friday, December 2, 2005 12:48 AM
Ran out of meds, eh?
But whatever that other stuff you're on is, I'll have what you're having
But whatever that other stuff you're on is, I'll have what you're having
scorpio-logic
Reply #33 Friday, December 2, 2005 1:15 AM
Reply #33 Friday, December 2, 2005 1:15 AM
Needs to share the Java nuts, quit chewing them and grind a few for some coffee....
PoSmedley
Reply #34 Friday, December 2, 2005 1:32 AM
Reply #34 Friday, December 2, 2005 1:32 AM
Hairy Fairies LIKE caffeine
but it can make them rather mean.
For they were meant to be serene
and not hopped up on Java beans.
Some use Bailey's Irish Cream
to liven up their caffeine.
And then in thongs they dance for glee
among the Wicklow forest trees.
So if you see,two or three,
Hairy Fairies on caffiene,
and they offer some with Irish Cream,
they'll throw in a thong for you, for FREE.
In the start of this I asked that somebody stop me. But NOOOooooOOO...you had to encourage me.
but it can make them rather mean.
For they were meant to be serene
and not hopped up on Java beans.
Some use Bailey's Irish Cream
to liven up their caffeine.
And then in thongs they dance for glee
among the Wicklow forest trees.
So if you see,two or three,
Hairy Fairies on caffiene,
and they offer some with Irish Cream,
they'll throw in a thong for you, for FREE.
In the start of this I asked that somebody stop me. But NOOOooooOOO...you had to encourage me.
scorpio-logic
Reply #36 Friday, December 2, 2005 1:43 AM
Reply #36 Friday, December 2, 2005 1:43 AM
the fairies aren't wearing thongs, and I hope you aren't either, Po!
PoSmedley
Reply #37 Friday, December 2, 2005 1:53 AM
A simple "That'll do pig' would have sufficed.
Reply #37 Friday, December 2, 2005 1:53 AM
| the fairies aren't wearing thongs, and I hope you aren't either, Po! |
A simple "That'll do pig' would have sufficed.
starkers
Reply #39 Friday, December 2, 2005 3:50 AM
Reply #39 Friday, December 2, 2005 3:50 AM
Why would anyone want to stop you....seems like you're having such a good time
Sleeping Dragon
Reply #40 Friday, December 2, 2005 6:49 AM
Reply #40 Friday, December 2, 2005 6:49 AM
Go Po. Go Po. Go Po. Go Po!!!
It's the truth that Fairies wear thongs. One gentle breath of dragon fire and
It's the truth that Fairies wear thongs. One gentle breath of dragon fire and
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Reply #21 Wednesday, November 30, 2005 1:35 PM