RPGFX
Comment #2 Monday, September 19, 2005 11:51 PM
Comment #2 Monday, September 19, 2005 11:51 PM
I agree about the words. They really hurt it. Wallpapers are more than just art, they need to fit as a desktop background. Unless very small or nearly transparent, text is not a really good idea for a wallpaper. Or, you could do what many do... include a version without the words as well. As for this wall, it is a very creative abstract design. The color is very bold and there is plenty of space for icons. It makes a decent wall.
Cyberworld
Comment #3 Thursday, September 22, 2005 3:33 PM
Comment #3 Thursday, September 22, 2005 3:33 PM
This has potentials,actually it is already a work of art, but it needs some corrections. DO the following: Remove the artificial white shadow from the top. Leave letters as they are. Take the selection tool in Photoshop and set it with a feather of 20-30px. Select the area left and right of the main picture theme and press delete as many times as needed to create a blend effect.That should be enough. Please do try and if you like the outcome do update it. I rate it 5-Stars in hope of an update! The color and composition is too live and vibrant to let it die out. 
teddybearcholla
Comment #4 Thursday, September 22, 2005 4:40 PM
Comment #4 Thursday, September 22, 2005 4:40 PM
Just a thought: a reply from you the author, is always in good form...a simple courtesy!!! 
PoSmedley
Comment #5 Friday, September 23, 2005 7:36 AM
Comment #5 Friday, September 23, 2005 7:36 AM
Sorry I haven't replied sooner. No excuses.
I apreciate all the comments and critiques and am trying to work them into another version of this. I was always a little nervous about the 'words'..and still am not sure. My biggest problem is keeping it simple. The first version of this was rejected, and like most of what I have rejected, I believe it was probably too 'busy', or I just hadn't really taken the time I did with versions that are approved. I'll probably be getting back to a couple of you with some questions.
Thanks again. Everyone here is so cool.
I apreciate all the comments and critiques and am trying to work them into another version of this. I was always a little nervous about the 'words'..and still am not sure. My biggest problem is keeping it simple. The first version of this was rejected, and like most of what I have rejected, I believe it was probably too 'busy', or I just hadn't really taken the time I did with versions that are approved. I'll probably be getting back to a couple of you with some questions.
Thanks again. Everyone here is so cool.
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Comment #1 Monday, September 19, 2005 9:34 PM