Ocean Breeze: Suggestions

I want to make sure it looks ok before I render ;)

Monday, February 4, 2008 by Pugboy | Discussion: Animated Wallpapers

I am almost done with my newest dream--Ocean Breeze. This is my first dream that is rendered, so go easy on me

Please post any suggestions



Of course, the final video would be high quality, unlike this screenshot.
-and92
Reply #1 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 5:36 AM
Too dark,I think
2of3
Reply #2 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 5:40 AM
I would put some shading and lighting on the hill to give it definition
Island Dog
Reply #3 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 7:08 AM
Yeah, the concept is great, but possibly light the hill a bit more. 


ZubaZ
Reply #4 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 8:09 AM
More hot chicks!

(and cowbell)

 
Hankers
Reply #5 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 8:32 AM
More hot chicks!

This is getting a bit old and strange.
ZubaZ
Reply #6 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 8:48 AM
More hot chicks!

This is getting a bit old and strange.
Some might say the same of us Hank. 
CarGuy1
Reply #7 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 9:29 AM
More hot chicks!
(and cowbell)


Ok...I'll bite, what's the cow bell for?
mike b1954
Reply #8 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 9:49 AM
Hey,Zubaz! ...and Carguy ... Heres' your Cowbell !!
.
MORE COWBELL
TheMasterBaron
Reply #9 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 9:52 AM
Ok...I'll bite, what's the cow bell for?


I think he has a fever and it's the only cure.
I need More Cowbell!
TheMasterBaron
Reply #10 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 9:53 AM
Damn, too slow to post!
mike b1954
Reply #11 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 10:00 AM
hehe .. I love it when we "cat and mouse"   
Pugboy
Reply #12 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 5:45 PM
Wow... Amazing how off topic people can get

I purposely have very little light on the hill because of the texture I am using. Not exactly the highest quality... I will look around for some more, and experiment. Thanks for your opinions!
Pugboy
Reply #13 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 6:35 PM
New screenshot! How is this lighting?

TheMasterBaron
Reply #14 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 7:38 PM
Color is much better! The tree on the far left is odd somehow. I think all the palms should have curved trunks.

How is this going to animate?
Pugboy
Reply #15 Tuesday, February 5, 2008 7:43 PM
There WILL be a seamless loop, if it is the last thing I do!!! The wind will blow through the leaves.

All of the trunks are curved, but some are at different angles. The leaves on the far left tree are a bit odd... Might have to take that one back to the nursery...
Island Dog
Reply #16 Wednesday, February 6, 2008 9:40 AM
Looking good!

Pugboy
Reply #17 Wednesday, February 6, 2008 6:53 PM
Thanks!

Final Screenshot before render (Unless there are other issues)



I know about that flat section in the middle left. That is already fixed.

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